When Firepaw first came, he had a collar on him- and he seemed so proud of himself to be in ThunderClan. Then Longtail, a warrior, tried to take the collar off, and Firepaw bit him in the ear. I guess other cats now think that he's pretty okay- but I think totally the opposite about that. He is arrogant, ignorant, and always seems proud of himself. Such a mouse-brained cat. He's even a KITTYPET! We Warriors do NOT allow such cats as kittypets to join in our clans- since we believe that warriors have warrior blood, which makes us stand out. Firepaw, on the other hand, does not posess the skill that we Warriors have. I wonder why Graystripe likes being with him- he's no fun, and also being a kittypet. Maybe its because he met him the first time- he knows Firepaw better than any of us right now. I really can't believe that we have a kittypet in our clan!
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The introduction was catching my attention.
ReplyDeleteI can't believe a kitty pet came
You had good format. I could see the three format.
I liked it when you describe how you felt about Firepaw.
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I like your introduction! It was catchig my attention.^^
ReplyDeleteYour introduction,body,and conclusion was good.
I liked about Firepaw! (New Arrival)
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Rusty isn't boring to me. I like how you said he isn't a normal house cat. He can catch more garden birds than any cat on my street. Tell Rusty I said hi.
ReplyDeleteokay... :)
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